“Pantoum for Two Lost Bird Dogs” performance poem by Sher Schwartz
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8 responses to ““Pantoum for Two Lost Bird Dogs” performance poem by Sher Schwartz”
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I liked the first read, heard the cyclical waiting, wanting of safe return first you, then the second dog who found home without first dog.
Then your gifts: pantoum pattern, birddogs bell like crickets, fiddle, water down a drain
Second performance enhanced by what I did not know.
Thank you for this poetry forum-
This is super helpful feedback— thanks so much!
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Also , if you do not see your comment post, it will as soon as I approve it. I have the comments on moderation to keep out obnoxious spam. Thank you for your patience. Also, I have a comment tracker on my phone, and sometimes this app does not alert me. Sigh. Thanks again or listening and for your comments.
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i’ll try to rewrite what i wrote on the blog but don’t think it posted. i really enjoyed this especially the second time around. loved the repetitive chorus that said ‘dang! i’m worried mister!’ (your music falls to the gravel) this is such a wonderful medium for such an artist bard as yourself. thanks for taking us into your story. i was smiling the whole listen.
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Hello! Thank you for your comments. I took me a day to respond as I have been traveling and in meetings one after another! Also , you do not see your comment post, it will as soon as I approve it. I have the comments on moderation to keep out obnoxious spam. Thank you for your patience. Also, I have a comment tracker on my phone, and sometimes this app does not alert me. Sigh. Thanks again or listening and for your comments.
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